Friday, November 25, 2005

Attack of the Fetuses: A Short Story About the End Times


“How long, O Lord, holy and true, dost thou not judge and avenge out blood on them that dwell on the earth?” -- Book of Revelation

So many strange things had happened over the last few days, Michelle almost forgot she was about to become a killer. Thousands – millions, perhaps – had simply disappeared. Vanished. The talking heads on television were saying it was the Rapture, that the good Christians of the world were taken to Heaven before the wrath of God was brought upon the rest of mankind. But that could not possible be true. How could it? For the father of the baby she was now about to have sucked out of her, the man who raped her, scarring her for life and forcing her into a decision she never wanted to have to make, disappeared, too. It was true that he became a Christian in jail; in fact, he wrote her many times begging for her forgiveness; and when he disappeared, his cell was filled with Bibles and his own writings for his love of Christ. But she was also a Christian. She had been going to Church since she was a child. Maybe she wasn’t the best Christian, maybe she thought parts of the Bible couldn’t possibly be true. How could they? According to science, God did not make the world in six days and rest on the seventh, and nor did He make man in His image. No, men evolved from monkeys. It was all explained by science. Scientists had facts and figures and devices. The Bible was based on faith. And she just couldn’t have absolute, 100% faith in anything that said so many things she disagreed with. But she did believe in Jesus, especially his words. That’s all it took to be a Christian, wasn’t it?

So she entered the scientist’s lab disturbed, confused. Not because she was about to take a life, for she didn’t believe a fetus was a life, that the thing growing in her womb would feel pain, but because she just couldn’t wrap her head around the idea that God would love a rapist more than her. After all, not only was she a Christian, she was donating the fetus to science, to be used as stem cells that might one day cure diseases or paralysis. No, she was not bothered at all by the fact she was about to become a killer.

So the scientist said something to her, but she did not hear it. She was too distracted, horrified, even, by what she saw in the lab: jars and jars of fetuses lining the wall. Some may have been six or seven months old. And it seemed as though they were frowning at her. Suddenly she didn’t feel so sure about her decision; but she blocked such nonsense out: it was the best decision for her. After all, her fetus was the product of rape. She had no choice in that matter. Plus, she was not ready for a child, especially not now, not with the world in such disarray.

So she followed the scientists orders. She laid down on the table. She spread her legs. She looked at his face, and he smiled at her. But it was disgusting smile; it looked as though he was enjoying this, enjoying looking at her, enjoying the curves of her body. But she let it continue; she let him strap down her arms and legs. Then he pulled out something that looked not unlike a coat hanger; in fact, if she didn’t know any better she would have said it was a coat hanger. And next thing she knew, it was inside her. Sucking, stabbing.

So then something incredible happened. At first all she heard were the sounds of breaking glass; but then the chanting began. “Holy, holy, holy, Lord God Almighty, which was, and is, and is to come!” Looking around she saw the source of it: it was the fetuses! Somehow their jars – their prison – had broken, and now they were chanting and crawling closer. The closer they came, the more menacing they looked, their wrinkled faces contorted into a look of revenge and judgment. And they had teeth. Sharp, pointed teeth, like a shark’s.

So the scientist was no longer ogling her; -no, he was turned away, backed up against the table on which she lay, facing the approaching fetuses, his body tense with shock and fear. Suddenly, the closest fetuses jumped on to the scientist and started biting him. Those that followed gnawed at his legs. And the scientist screamed. Screamed and screamed and screamed. And bled. Blood was everywhere; it covered her hospital gown, some was on her hands and face. But she couldn’t move; she couldn’t escape. She could only pray, and pray she did, begging for God’s forgiveness, for killing her child, for anything that may have caused the horrible fate she was certain to meet at any moment.

So then the screaming stopped. She couldn’t see the doctor, for he had already crumpled to the ground, out of her sight. And then another voice – a child’s voice – called to her: “Mommy, mommy. Why mommy? Why didn’t you love me?” She could feel something crawling between her legs, pulling at her hospital gown. Then she saw it: a fetus, her fetus, her baby. It was so tiny as it crawled towards her face; and yet it was so beautiful, so perfect and innocent. How could she have killed such a thing?

So suddenly her straps unfastened, and her baby began to talk again: “Mommy, you have been condemned to live through the tribulation period, through the end times. But you have a chance, mommy. A chance to one day be with Jesus and Heaven on Earth. But you must believe!!! With your whole heart and whole soul, you must believe. God loves you; He sent me here to tell you that. And He’s given you a gift. It’s something that you may not appreciate at first, something that may even disgust you. But you must accept it; it will guide you and lead you down the righteous path during the coming end times. Promise me you’ll do as God has commanded.”

So she nodded. She would have said something, explained to her baby how sorry she was for what she had done, begged it for forgiveness; but she was still to overcome by fear to have said anything that made sense. And then the baby spoke once more: “Mommy, your gift is this: you must eat me.”

So after it said those last words – You must eat me – the baby/fetus fell to its side, lifeless once again. Michelle picked it up, cradled it. Then she did as she had been commanded; she ate it. At first, she was overcome by the fact that her baby tasted a lot like chicken. But then something wonderful happened, as a new sense of purpose spread through her body, as a complete and total understanding that God loved her washed away all the fear and guilt. She got off the table and walked toward the door, past the pile of bones that had once been the scientist, ready to face the end times, ready to walk a righteous path.

THE END

50 Comments:

Blogger Des said...

FIRSTLY. Abortions are illegal after halfway through the second trimester. But of course, you wouldn't know that, just like you don't know what a crack high feels like.

Secondly, if you think that would somehow convert any sane person to your way of thinking.... I am more inclined to NOT go back to Christianity, just because it would associate me with you, and this story. Which, by the way, is possibly the most offensive and disgusting thing I have ever read in my entire life.

8:17 PM  
Anonymous Lisa said...

If you are going to make analogies to things or talk about things make sure you actually have experienced or researched the subject first. Also do not put words in the mouth of God. "Jesus Hates the Holidays, But He Loves Christmas". None of us truly knows what he does and does not want and should not claim to. It is blasphemous and so are you.

8:51 PM  
Anonymous Lisa said...

And by the way I always thought eating babies was associated with witches so I guess Michelle must become a witch in order to come back to God. Doesn't that seem a little odd to you?

9:09 PM  
Anonymous Lisa said...

I'm starting to believe more and more that you are the devil's advocate. I know I have been tempted more than once to leave the Christian faith while reading this blog. I hope you realize the effect you are having on your Christian readers as well as on your non-Christians ones.

9:18 PM  
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10:34 PM  
Blogger Electric Grandmother said...

What an amazing story! Very powerful and moving. If ever there was a story to put women off of abortion it would be this one.
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G and awesome.
Four stars
BRAVO E.G

10:38 PM  
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11:06 PM  
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11:08 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

where exactly did i say how old the fetuses were. i have to say you two (des and lisa) are so blinded by witchcraft that you couldn't see the truth if Jesus were to come down himself and speak it to you. i still love you, though, and i pray for you. i'm sure at heart you are good people. that's why i really think public humiliation and torture would really do you each some good, bringing you to the light and all that. i'm trying to think of something good: how about branding? you should each be branded (women are, after all, not unlike cattle). it'll be like in the scarlett letter.

2:02 PM  
Blogger Des said...

"jars and jars of fetuses lining the wall. Some may have been six or seven months old."

2:49 PM  
Anonymous Kia said...

Forgive me, Nathaniel, but I'm rather curious about something? Did your mother try to abort you? If so, that would explain a lot.

11:56 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

Des, your just too smart for this blog. you know my words better than i do. but of course the fact that some of the fetuses may have been 6 or 7 months old really doesn't matter, since a) the story takes place somewhere in the near future b) it takes place after the Rapture, when everything is in chaos and c) i never said anything about it being a legal abortion.

but in any event, i'm glad you brough it to my attention; for now that i know such scholars read my blog I'm going to be much more careful with my words.

1:12 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

kia -- did you know you were named after a really crappy car? or maybe the car company was so inspired by your own crappiness, it named itself after you. whatever... to the point: my mother may have attempted to abort me; but it seems highly unlikely, since she's always been a good Christian woman and has been spitting out babies since she was 19. you could learn a lot from my mother. your hostility toward Jesus is due to the fact she's everything you're not: a baby factory. i'm going to have to post about this at some point: there should be a minimum age (I'm thinking 19) at which a woman has to have had at least one kid. perhaps being blessed with the gift of life and labor at a young age will bring women raised out of the good teachings of the Church back the the Lord.

1:17 PM  
Anonymous Kia said...

For your information, you bumbling backwoods bumpkin (1) Kia is NOT my real name and (2) this pseudonymn (which means "false name" in case you've never heard the word before) is the real name of King Tut's mother! But that doesn't matter.

Let me assure you that if I wanted to make a baby I'm fully aware of how to go about it. I don't need your mother, or anyone else, to teach me. I've just chosen not to. And let me ask you something: what if a woman doesn't meet the man she's destined to spend her life with until she's 24 or 25? Should she hop into bed with the first man who asks her on her 19th birthday, in hopes she'll get pregnant? Or do you think she should be forced to marry someone of her parents choosing, even if she despises the man. Either way, it goes against the laws of nature, and therefore, against the laws of God.

The reason I think you're so fascinated with dominating women is because no woman in her right mind would have either you or your friend Parnell! And furthermore, I have no hostility towards Jesus, only towards morons like you!

9:46 PM  
Blogger Des said...

Kia - I believe Nathaniel has a son and therefore (I'm hoping, in the name of everything right and good, otherwise my mind will be absolutely contorted beyond belief by the confusion of the situation) a wife. Or had a wife, at some point.

10:00 PM  
Blogger Des said...

Also - Nathaniel, I appologize if my comments have been rude up to this point. I will try to express my opion from here on in without blatantly attacking your beliefs.

10:04 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

kia -- i always find it amusing how heathens such as yourself always assume it's uneducated rednecks who are the true believers in the Lord. i'm highly educated and was born and raised in a rather large city. in any event, it's that kind of ignorance that will be your downfall. it's also the same kind of self-assured, self-righteous ignorance that makes you so sure kia was King Tut's mother, for a) the spelling is kiya and b)no one really knows exactly who Tut's mother was. Some say it was Nefertiti.

as for your silly fantasies about true love and all that, I think that either your parents should find you a husband or if you're too ugly for any of those men, then there should be a lottery system. Instead of a poor man's tax, it'll be an ugly woman's tax.

And it goes without saying that a woman should not hop into bed with the first man she meets on her 19th birthday. That would make her a whore... or a Canadian, a.k.a. America's evil, liberal baby sister.

10:05 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

des -- no need to apologize. it only makes me stronger in my faith. it does anger me that those who lack my relationship with the Lord are allowed to hear ideas certain to bring them eternal damnation.

10:09 PM  
Blogger Des said...

I am offended by your attack on Canada, however (being from there myself, which I'm sure will endear it to you even more). What makes Canada evil?

1:49 AM  
Anonymous Kia said...

Des: Thanks for clarifying that point. Personally, I wouldn't have either of them if they came with a castle and a Rolls Royce because of the things they advocate. But then again, I'm happily married, to a man who loves me and treats me like a queen, even though we have neither a castle nor a Rolls Royce.

Nathaniel: Kia's (or Kiya's, however you wish to spell it) name was originally written in heiroglyphs. When I "adopted" the name, the spelling I saw in the text was "Kia." Since then, I've seen it spelled "Kiya" as well, so to me it could be spelled either way. Anyhow, every source I've seen so far states that Kia (or Kiya, if you will) was the mother of King Tut. And since my husband has a deep love for ancient Egypt, I've learned quite a bit about the subject. So much for your theories about my "silly fantasies" and ugly taxes.

4:02 AM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

kia -- i'm glad you were blessed by the Lord and were able to find a man that loves you. personally, i could never love a woman so deeply twisted by withcraft and lacking a personal relationship with the Lord, even if she were the most beautiful woman on earth; for such a woman surely has a soul as ugly as the elephant man looks. But the fact that your husband loves Egypt so much explains it; that and the fact that the Devil also commands his followers to "love" one another, the same way cults demand certain members to get married.

But just a side note -- the fact that you're married proves nothing about the ugly tax, simply because the ugly tax can exist independently of your being married. not everything is about you, you know. it's that kind of thinking that leads women that it's okay to whore themselves out and get abortions.

12:06 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

Des -- attacking Canada is very necessary, for it is where the Godless liberals of America always look to as an example of greatness -- the lax drug laws, the legalization of gay marriage, the communist healthcare system. But outside of the fact that Canada is evil, it is also rightfully the United States', since Britain only took it from us when we refused to pay our taxes. that, of course, doesn't make it necessary that true Christians villify it; however, i think it important that America start reminding it's neighbor to the north it is only independent because we feel the need to humor it. But if it starts exporting its evil -- as it has already done, in many ways, like drugs, for instance -- then it may be necessary to completely take it over and convert it into a shining example of conservative values, just as we are not doing in the gulf area so devastated by Katrina.

12:11 PM  
Anonymous Kia said...

Well, I could personally never love a man with such twisted thinking as yours, either, so that makes us even. And hey, I think Des was trying to be nice to you. She even apologized to you, but you turn around and insult her country. That isn't cool, and there isn't any excuse for it.

6:11 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

kia -- the attack on Canada wasn't meant to be a personal insult. i was merely stating a mix of fact and opinion about Canada. and she asked what was evil about it. really, though, i wouldn't be too worried about what i think or say; i'd be more concerned about what God will say. you should really be thanking me, for while i know you don't believe in the Bible, i've simply been trying to explain what it says and therefore what God might say about the hedonistic lifestyle you guys have been living. and it's not as though i blame you; it's our culture that -- the culture of the Devil that has warped your mind such that you don't know right from wrong.

7:35 PM  
Anonymous Lisa said...

If Canada is so bad compared to America why is America the country being bombarded with hurricanes and not Canada? You seem to think those are caused by un Christian beliefs. So by your logic Canada should be considered the more faithful to God's path.

11:01 AM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

lisa -- to answer your question, there are at least two reasons i can think of, the first beng the most likely.

1) Canada is really a part of the US so God didn't differentiate between the two when he sent the hurricane to the Gulf region. In fact, I'd say this is irrefutable proof the Canada is rightfully ours.

2) if God does differentiate between the two, then the US got the hurricanes because He sees us as a nation with so much Christian potential and as a nation that holds itself out as Christian. So when the US is overcome by the lesbian cabal and the homosexual agenda He is offended and wants to set us back on the righteous path we were on when our Christian Forefathers came to this continent.

11:51 AM  
Anonymous Lisa said...

Ok even if He believes Canada is really part of the United States he would have sent the hurricanes further north to punish us for being worse. Also I don't think that he would just not punish us at all if he thought we were being a poor Christian nation. If everyone is "straying" in Canada we would have more potential for correction and He would more likely be punishing us worse since "everyone" was beginning to stray and he would need to redirect us before it is too late. But instead we are enjoying longer summers with less harsh winters which make our lives easier and more enjoyable. I doubt he would reward a nation he found to be lacking in his beliefs and if he did it would be vastly unfair and very unlike Him. So I believe that he is pleased by our decision to allow homosexuals to marry. It is the only recent change which could account for the blessing of less severe weather unless you are willing to accept the idea of global warming which I know you are very keen not to. The truth is that the world is changing and I believe that God understands that and he is willing to change for us so that what is best for us is always kept in mind and I think your unwillingness to accept these changes is what is incurring his wrath in the United States not environmentalists or the Lesbian Cabal or Homosexuals or Witches.

6:24 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

lisa -- i've done much research on abortion, for your information. the story, however, is supposed to be mildly science fiction, due to the fact that the rapture has not actually occured in the real world, and it has in the story; so the abortion preformed in the story is not up to the more clinical standards of right now. but in any event that's not the point of the story.

As for your comment about knowing what Jesus likes and does not like, you can infer the title of that post from the Bible, itself. The Bible teaches that to ignore Jesus and his words is wrong, and disallowing the use of Christmas, stripping Christ from the holiday, we are going against the Bible. Therefore, i don't think i've done anything wrong, in this case; for if we go against the Bible, Jesus is not happy.

7:37 PM  
Blogger lisa said...

You still haven't addressed the fact that you had God make Michelle commit the witchly act of eating her baby in order for him to take her back. I'm not sure where you were going with this but I don't think it is heaven.

4:58 PM  
Anonymous Celestina Warbeck said...

I'm wondering how he deduces that a fetus would taste like chicken. It reminds me of a joke that was going around our high school when I was a kid. Which isn't worth repeating.

(Will never eat at KFC again).

12:01 AM  
Blogger somnio said...

why are you so retarded?

4:32 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

somnio -- you're going to have to give me some more details before i could possibly answer your question. mainly -- what makes me retarded? i don't think i'm retarded, mostly because i can read and write and don't drool. in any event, i wish people would not leave stupid comments such as this on my blog. if you were eight or even fifteen or so, i would understand, but, really, a law student should be able to come up with something a little more intelligent.

4:48 PM  
Blogger lisa said...

I think you didn't want us to notice that Michelle committed the act of a witch since you continually ignoring my comments pointing this out. I'm starting to think that you have an ulterior motive with this site and I think it has something to do with favours for our not so friendly neighbour to the south and I'm not talking about America, I mean Satan.

7:54 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

lisa -- it's good to see you back, although yet again you are wrong. michelle ate the baby because God, speaking through the fetus, commanded her to. throughout the Bible God has followers sacrifice things, killing their children, making them suffer as Job did, etc. Eating the fetus was God's way of testing Michelle, as well as a way of punishing her. He knows, though, that somewhere deep down inside her there is something worth saving and that she has a role to play as the end times progress. eating the fetus is also a way of awakening that part of her. i plan on making a book of short stories about the end times, and all of the characters i've introduced so far -- including Michelle -- will appear again. in any case, maybe eating fetuses is very close what witches do. i know witches kill live babies and eat them; but i've never heard of them harvesting fetuses for food.

8:16 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

celestina -- i've deduced that fetuses taste like chicken, because everything tastes like chicken.

8:18 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ok. So I can screw guys left n' right, get hecka drunk, kill a few bums.. eventually get raped, just eat my fetus and BAM in heaven again.

OHMIGAWD, CHRISTIANITY IS GREAT! PRAISE HEY-SUES!

11:57 PM  
Anonymous ZAC said...

Holy Crap Attack of the Fetuses!! Sounds like a new Starwars Film. When you have a brain disease (if not already) you will need those stem cells to live. I Agree with des 100%. Fetuses cant feel pain intill their neurons are all connected which isn't untill the after the second trimester. It doesn't even know it is alive.

7:29 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

zac -- or so scientists would have you believe, since as long as the ignorant fall for such blatant trickery, scientists can continue to harvest fetuses for their dastardly purposes.

7:54 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nathaniel ya say your "highly educated" but i guess they must have left geography and history out of education 1, canada isn't a part of the US, neither is mexico before you go any further, 2, communist health care is great, means every one can get fast access to a doctor instead paying then getting a doctor, 3, it seems that you must not have heard abought the war of 1812...the US attacked Canada that year...it didn't go so well for the US, and WE earned our independance rather then rebelled for it, so try reading a Bible, history text book, and an atlas.

1:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

even though i don't like you and don't agree with basicly anthig you have to say, abortion is basicly wrong "IN THIS DATE AND AND COUNTRY" their are condoms and sponges and sperm asides, and birth patrol, but even for raped victoms their is the "CONTRASEPTIVE PILL" stop the embro from becomeing a fetus and it doesn't hurt like abortion, and if you do mess up ALL thouse safty nets then yes you only have yourself to blame and abortion=birth for the amount of pain you get from it so might as well birth the kid and give him/her to adoption...thats what i think any so remeber no glove no love, or the contrecetive pill for accidents

1:13 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ive decided this whole website has to be one giant pisstake, probably perpetrated by some college students sitting reading the posts with big ass grins plastered across their faces. It can't be real opinions expressed by an educated person. If somebody did hold beliefs such as the ones expressed here they would have to classed as irredeemably insane. Nuts. Cuckoo. Out to lunch.Bananas. And most likely typing under supervision, from a very well padded room somewhere. At least I would feckin hope so. Come on guys, fess up. It was interesting to read the main page but its gone too far. I laughed at first but now you're just depressing me.

3:38 PM  
Blogger Nathaniel said...

anonymous -- you certainly aren't the first with such accusations, and i suppose you shant be the last. it saddens me that people who disagree with the truths that the good doctor and i hold dear, we always get accused of being crazy or of perpetrating some elaborate joke. it just isn't so -- the truth of the lord is something i hold dear and shall preach on this site until the end of my days.

9:40 PM  
Anonymous ZAC said...

What dastardly plans?!?! Please name at least one. They are trying to help people live longer and happier lives.

What would you do to a sixteen year old rape victim who is now pregnant? Would you refuse her abortion? What kind of a life is that for a child to grow up not knowing who the father is, and constantly knowing that he or she is the product of a sick twisted individual who raped the mother? The mother would have to quit school, get a job, which is too much pressure to put on anyone, let alone having a kid on top of it. Think carefully on what I have just said. At least give me that satisfaction.
P.S. I enjoy reading your posts thank you Also, what is your opinion on music of today and Harry Potter?

2:58 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You're either a creepy bastard who gets some sick satisfaction out of writing sick stories, or worse, you're a creepy bastard that actually believes what you type.

Either way, I hope the authorities get to you before you hurt someone.

4:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Well now...that is some fucked up shit...

6:30 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

this shit makes me embaressed to be catholic :/

11:49 PM  
Anonymous God said...

this made me laugh so much.

11:11 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

im addited to sex, can God forgive me?

11:13 PM  
Anonymous satan said...

no, you're doomed to hell. but don't worry, you can chill with me when you get here ;)

10:12 PM  
Anonymous Nathaniel said...

I just wanted to say, i am very sorry about this. i and the good doctor will destroy this website and all parts of it because we realize just how much our strong belief scares all of you demon-worshippers. May God save your pathetic, condemned souls

10:51 PM  

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